Come to Life
- The guys should stop circling around the room and talk more clearly. They should also organize it a bit so that we can tell.
Who or What?
Try to find a much harder one and add key events for the person. Although good job on describing them in almost every way possible.
Into the Future
They did a good job on making up that story and the plot is well done. Some of the plot is a bit like a fantasy but some parts contain a piece of reality.
Interview
I think that we did ok and that we shouldn't tell that blankly and should speak and pause at the right amount of time. Also there were some typos in the script and we found out about it and tyr to change the words and the formation.
